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Tsunami of Love

As the ocean swells Around the heart I love your jeans But most of all I prefer the hanger My world like a shawl You invaded every space in it Like a tsunami of love Strikes beautiful Taking over the body Becoming a temple adoring you Worshiping the very ground On which you stand Oh so very sweet My love I hunger for you Beating in the deep Invaded the very soul Falling my heart in love With you

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/16/2013 4:24:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work today..Very passionate lines penned..Thanks for the visit by my Limerick..Sara

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 5:13:00 PM

thank you deeply sara wonderful comment greatly appreciated

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/16/2013 12:36:00 PM

liam, wow you have covered her deeply with your love... a nice romantic you..xox~ Linda

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 1:34:00 PM

IS ONLY LOVE ALONE THATS COVERED DREAMING SOMETHING BEAUTIFUL TO SAY I LIVE ALONE HAVE DONE FOR SOME TIME THANK YOU DEEPLY LINDA KINDLY APPRECIATED

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/16/2013 11:44:00 AM

Hey Liam, Another good one from you buddy.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 1:30:00 PM

THANK YOU KEN MY DEAR FRIEND DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/16/2013 8:41:00 AM

You are a one born romantic..more than the bard and so close to my pablo neruda..Yeah lovely.Tnks for your nixe comments on my sonnet with our dear Mystic Rose

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 1:27:00 PM

A PLEASURE WAS IN THE READING MY DEAR FRIEND ALWAYS NICE READING YOUR POETRY THANK YOU FROM THE DEPTHS WONDERFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT APPRECIATED I HOPE THE SUN SMILES BEAUTIFUL ON YOU

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/16/2013 12:40:00 PM

nice i meant : )