Try Me

My breaking point has been reached one wrong look is gonna end in bloodshed I'm a ticking time bomb come test me I'll leave you in pieces believe me this when it comes down to you or me we both already know the answer so step up or step off because I would love to destroy you

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Skat A

Date: 7/21/2013 9:23:00 AM

Hi Richard, I like this awesome write. Congrats, on having your poem featured on the soups home page. Have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:35:00 AM

Richard, , Congratulations on your featured poem of the week. enjoy life with smiles :-) love <3 LINDA

April Gabriella

Date: 7/18/2013 7:55:00 PM

This made me giggle. I have felt this way MANY times. Great job!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/20/2011 9:57:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Richard. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol