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Truths Unspoken

Born of glaciers, rivers flow, turquoise ice and untouched snow, deep green valleys far below, ancient stands of hardwoods grow. Icy rivers running deep, through the mountain's midnight sleep, darkened waters crest and leap, earthbound secrets rivers keep. Stoically the mountains stand, nurturing the age-old land, born before mere time began, when Earth was pure, devoid of man. River rocks were once rough stone, water-smoothed, by eons honed, each grain of sand is sand alone, truths unspoken lie unknown. Listen to the waters speak, every river, ocean, creek, there lie answers all must seek, flowing from the mountain's peak. ©copyright2009DanielleWhite

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Date: 1/24/2010 7:30:00 AM
This was sure to win..congrats on a most lovely poem. BG
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Date: 1/22/2010 12:39:00 PM
congrats on the win!!
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Date: 1/18/2010 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your First place win...Wonderful poem...Marty
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Date: 1/17/2010 1:19:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win Danielle.. well deserved ..well written.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/16/2010 9:27:00 AM
Danielle, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >> James
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Date: 1/14/2010 12:31:00 PM
The "flow" of your poem is really nice. Congratulations on your first place finish!
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Date: 1/14/2010 5:25:00 AM
Danielle, Your marvelous poem encompasses everything about a river: beauty, history, function, environment... all painting a beautiful river through words. No wonder you won first place. Congratulations, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/13/2010 11:47:00 PM
This is really beautiful Danielle. Congratulations on winning. Connie
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Date: 1/13/2010 10:03:00 AM
How beautiful and visually pleasing. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:19:00 PM
A deserved win!! Congratulations!! andrea
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Date: 1/12/2010 4:29:00 PM
congratulations on your first place win! Awesome!
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Date: 1/12/2010 2:29:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Danielle, with a profound undercurrent of symbolism. Your first place award in this contest is well-deserved. And it gives us who have yet to read yours a starting place for diving in. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:28:00 AM
Exceptional poem, Danielle! Congratulations on your Ist place win in the contest! Great write, indeed! Goes to my favs! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:09:00 AM
Hooray for you, Danielle with this number one winning poem!!! Congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:08:00 AM
Your rhyme is spectacular and the poem lovely. Congratulations on your well deserved first in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/12/2010 1:02:00 AM
Dear Danielle, This is a magnificent poem and so deserving its First Place Win. CONGRATULATIONS! The Last stanza is amazing. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent once again. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/12/2010 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations on this fabulous work. A worthy winner in Brian's contest. cheers Margaret
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Date: 1/12/2010 12:22:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Danielle.Rgds Brian.If you care to souplmail me a forwarding address I'll airmail your prize.My latest contest RHYME TIME is now open.
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Date: 1/8/2010 12:03:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Danielle.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:38:00 PM
Best of luck with your poems on the next round...Raul
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Danielle. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2009 6:06:00 PM
Danielle - Wonderful rhyme and flow made the message of this poem even more enjoyable if that is possible - outstanding - I just want to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/24/2009 6:54:00 AM
Congrats Danielle on the featuring of your poem "Truths Unbroken." Have a wonderful liberal day. Vince
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Date: 2/23/2009 5:01:00 PM
Awesome rhyme and flow with amazing imagery. Warmest congrats on a beautiful featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/23/2009 7:36:00 AM
This would go well with Zen...the peace....sublimity...otherselfness. Congrats on this fine selection. Love, daver
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