Truth

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sotto Poet.

Listen to poem:

Written: October 02, 2023 For Robert James Liguori Contest _______________________________________ Fervent mishaps start life's biggest wins. The first crocus shrieks and grins. A bird's song caused snowflakes to bloom. Pink, peach, and gold hues in the sky loom. A fib said once might have afar-reaching effects. Even as there's time for the truth to tie its elects, I once took a pathless route to a sluggish win. Suitable people can clash with the truth within. Appearances may mislead, and secrets may hide. A brave and savvy tale, hiding an enigma inside. Cross rivers and lofty hilltops to find the truth. Seeking truth amid a world of lies and sleuth Aged tale as Eden Tree, vernal as a raw tooth Men grasp lip-thatch form, art, and truth. Erstwhile, tales, and fables tell. Truth, rising from the depths of its well. Authenticity faces life's storms defenseless. Yet slyness stays sealed to strife senseless. Justice and fairness ensure all are rated fairly. Dark deceit and evil send spun wiles sparsely. Be brave—the liar is a coward and a slave. Sneaky, skilled at scams and lies, awful knave. Being honest is punter than money and status. Stick to the truth, relish light, do not tend to fuss. Righteousness is power; truth must prevail. True bravery for an hour typically will avail. Under any disaster, selfish wails yield no gain. Inspire with grit and firm will, not always pain.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/6/2023 7:31:00 AM

I tried to select a favorite line or two but was unable - they are all so well put together with your artist's pen! Congratulations Las! :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/5/2023 11:00:00 PM

Beautiful, Lasaad! I love the involving trends of nature's disciplinary movements and touches throughout. The fluidity balances, once again, naturally, which is prominently noticeable. My compliments on your placement in Robert's contest, my friend! Aloha, William

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/2/2023 7:45:00 PM

Dear Sotto, this rhyming poem is an impeccable reflection of the power of truth, beyond and above all! No matter how harsh Or full of obstacles the path towards honesty is, but it's the only purity and authenticity that blesses humanity with fruitful outcomes of peace and tranquility in the end..There's so much insight in every line, that you've so profoundly woven! It almost feels like a beautiful tapestry of wise words, here to connect us with moral values on so many levels. Loved reading this

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/2/2023 2:59:00 PM

dearest Sotto--your poem struck me with its strength and insight into our human weakness that can be turned into human strength. Every verse spoke to me in different and profound ways. It's truly a comprehensive and skillfully written masterpiece. I liked: " The liar is a coward and a slave. Righteousness and truth are strength and bravery. Your poem reflects some of my deepest values and beliefs. Am faving this for inspiration and strength when I need it. Thanks for sharing your creativity!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2023 12:09:00 PM

Hi, Sotto. An inspiring poem here. it's cool how it forms what looks like a keyhole almost.