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Trust My Love

Anacreontic verse Trust my love Your sweet thoughts heartbeats missed, My passion still put to tests, Feelings of love why should I prove ? Swear by God and tell lies, Jump from height feign into waters, Cut the arteries show the blood flow, Will that mean ? See me simmer slowly inside, As distrust shouts and nibbles my soul, Challenge my patience to eyes' constant stare Dried up tears and streaked cheeks, Not a life moves I am better dead. Written Nov 12th, 2015 For contest by Edward Ebbs Awarded 4th place win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/20/2015 9:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Upma! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:21:00 PM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/19/2015 5:15:00 PM
very emotional write Dr Sharma:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:23:00 AM
Hi Dr. Upma: Very emotional and moving. Congratulations on a great win!
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:09:00 AM
A very emotional and powerful write, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/19/2015 2:31:00 AM
this is soo emotive,dr upma.. super congrats and huggs
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:12:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 11/18/2015 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations Dr. Sharma
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win!! -LU xxx *smiles*
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:20:00 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:26:00 PM
intriguing title and verse that bends tragedy and sadness in a relationship.. enjoyed it!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/13/2015 6:50:00 AM
Deep write, seems to be a need based relationship, which is to me, unhealthy. We all have times when we need help from our partners, but to base a relationship on need is to relinquish control of ourselves to that person and that often leads to abuse. Nicely written.
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Date: 11/12/2015 4:33:00 PM
Lovely Upma...have never seen this form before.
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