Trust Ii

Trust is only a word after all, why do we trust? When at the other end of a broken one, one is labelled a fool a simpleton! © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Richard Palmer

Date: 9/26/2012 4:08:00 AM

it is Harry,so many ppl today abuse that word,seems to be played out,luv the thug look lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2012 8:45:00 PM

at first this looked like a tanka to me. With just a bit of work it could be tanka as well as free verse. I really like it, Harry! and your new picture is very nice too. I like it even better than your last avatar!

Harry Horsman
Date: 9/26/2012 1:48:00 AM

i was thinking of a tanka, thanks for that

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2012 8:10:00 PM

Hola Harry, I'm done being a fool & simpleton... I like to think of myself a non-believer of everyone.. I to can not be trusted when it comes to keeping my word. I'm not gonna lie, I have such a hard time keeping my words, when I can not even trust the person asking me to trust them.. oi! that sounds confusing.. enjoyed your verse... xox~pd

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/25/2012 6:05:00 PM

Awww not everyone thinks only a fool trusts? I trust :0 [The write The Master's House had 4 parts :)..my poems] Light & Love

Harry Horsman
Date: 9/26/2012 1:47:00 AM

Oh Deb you sure are no fool

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2012 2:56:00 PM

reflective broth for the soul, harry... trust is all about self-respect.. grreat job here!.:) huggs!

Chidozie Uche O.

Date: 9/25/2012 9:58:00 AM

But one must become a fool to embrace trust, still why must we trust? Nice one

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/25/2012 7:53:00 AM

What a lovely thought and so true, without trust we have nothing xx

Ralph Mason

Date: 9/25/2012 7:20:00 AM

I don't want to live in a world without trust and faith. Nice poem. warm thoughts, Ralph

Diana Dalton

Date: 9/25/2012 7:17:00 AM

Funny how we feel like a fool when the one breaking the trust is acting foolish!