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Truely Blessed

Aznas’ wings protect throughout the night Beautiful as the lustrous morning light Cascade down from heaven, glowing Divine while engulfed in knowing Endless truth and unconditional love Frightened while visited from above Godly essence of the soul Holy visions begin to take its toll Innocent thoughts now take the lead Joy starts as it’s planted a seed Kindred, surround as clear as day Loneliness a rumour, never to play Mother God to you and I Night as bright as the day light sky Opera, the sound of the song Nightingales sing, never a note wrong Protection in life for our sacred blueprint Questions asked, answered in a subtle hint Realm of records, held in a grand hall Secrets that are given out freely to all Touched by an aura, making me think twice Unforgiving actions, knowing I must pay the price Victorious today, as she is each and every time White army surrounds me, the harmonic chime Xanadu, such a rich and glorious place to see Yuman families blessed also, but never meant to be Zoetic as she creates life and peace to you and me. (not for contest, just a first attempt at ABC....Not in the traditional format)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/20/2010 1:37:00 PM
Terrific ABC Gareth, the lovely thing about the ABC form is, it can be written differently. Forms have become so written in stone. Times change and if forms can have a fork in the road like life, then so be it >> James
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Date: 3/10/2010 4:45:00 PM
I usually do not like abc poems, writers tend to take to many liberties to manitain the abc structure which sacrifices the meaning of the write. In this case it was an excellent write, the flow and direction maintained throughout the read. A credit to your imagination and talent. Thanks for the comment on Captured Souls.
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:17:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Gareth. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:39:00 AM
Very clever, shows skill. Susan
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