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True Poetry

She sat there in her room wondering so thinking much too hard to find an idea to write a poem that day ideas came, ideas left soon confusion arose in her mind for indeed, poetry comes, from the heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/5/2009 3:13:00 PM
I love this piece! Good job - eduardo
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Date: 5/5/2009 2:18:00 PM
Very nice Etheree. I have also some posted poem in Etheree form and thank you for your warm and honest comment. Ernilando
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:39:00 AM
Indeed, it does...and the soul, too.:) A lovely message you have written here....Peace, Sara:)
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Date: 4/23/2009 5:03:00 AM
well written and oh so true. great poem
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Date: 4/21/2009 4:27:00 PM
Love the last line in this one--poetry does often come from the heart. Nice use of this challenging form. I can relate to your words. At times, the harder I try the harder it is to find the right words. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Blessings to you. Have a wonderful day. Karen
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Date: 4/21/2009 3:54:00 PM
Indeed it does come from the heart, Maryam. We cannot force the thoughts or words, they simply "come" to us when we look inside ourselves. A very true definition of "True Poetry." Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2009 3:17:00 PM
You said it so beautifully..lovely work, Maryam. ..Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/21/2009 2:43:00 PM
No confusion in this beautiful and honest write. Love this form and how well you wrote it. Nice work! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/21/2009 2:29:00 PM
Very well done sweetheart! ETHEREES are not easy... yours is so well done, with perfect flow and grammatical continuity... BRAVO! Hugs, Keith
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