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True Or Not True

True or Not True No one loves me baby Cause I am dog gone mean. I have to have my way Or I start to shout and scream. (NOT true!) I am as helpless as a kitten Or so it seems. I wear verbal boxing mittens Beneath blue moonbeams… (True? Or NOT true?) There is no time for hugging Passion is very lean. I am fearful of a mugging And all things in between… (PART True!) No one loves me baby I am in my safety shell. I do not mean maybe. It is thicker than…Oh, well. (PART True.) Hey. Do you poets love me? I think I am turning green. I am looking in the mirror. But my face is not seen. (WHAT?!?) Hatred, envy… I abhor. I am opinionated. Heavenly ways, I adore. Godly love anticipated. (True.) Who loves me, baby? I can only say for sure. God and Jesus love me. They are my hope and cure. (True.) Okay. Okay! Okay!!! Many love me dearly. Both here and up above, I feel your love near me. (Thank you and God above.) © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 3, 2010 Inspired by Deborah Guzzi’s “Who Loves You, Baby” contest.

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Date: 1/13/2010 9:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dane Ann! Interesting and inspiring write. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/13/2010 7:35:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Dane.Rgds brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my endeavours.
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Date: 1/13/2010 6:35:00 AM
Dane Ann - many congratulations on your wonderful winning poem. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/12/2010 10:05:00 AM
Of course you're loved. A sorry world it would be if we were not loved despite our faults. Exaggerated no doubt. Congratulations Dane Ann. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:01:00 AM
lol!!!!! Thank you Dane Anne, I needed that after all these mushy things. Still laughing out loud, but I can't help myself, I love anyhow. Lainie
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Date: 1/3/2010 5:04:00 PM
i'll answer that question with a question "Who loves you baby?" johnny
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Date: 1/3/2010 4:21:00 AM
Yes We love You and God loves you too,I guess you are his favorite angel dear:) beautiful..Charma
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