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True Love Waits and the Reply

My dearest love, I hope this finds you well. You said you needed time apart to think. My world has shattered, and each day is hell without you! Into nothingness I sink. I know how frightened you’ve been to commit to our relationship. And when you said you wished to date around, I had to grit my teeth! I think about you in the bed of someone else! Oh, darling, don’t you miss my gentle touch each morning when you wake? I can’t accept the ending of such bliss! Recall our many good times. For the sake of all we had, I'm waiting, and I pray that you will not throw everything away. My love, I got your note and had to write you back because I need for you to know I think about you every day and night. I look outside and see the falling snow reminding me of those sweet moments when we’d come in from the cold and then get warm beside a fire, make love all night, and then I’d wake to find you snuggled by my arm. There is no one but you. and I was wrong to leave you! Oh, Darling, please forgive me. I’m coming home, and now it won’t be long till I am in your arms. How patiently you’ve waited! You have shown a love so true I likewise pledge my lasting love to you. Written October 15, 2016 For Phillip Garcia's True Love Waits - 2 English Sonnets Contest

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Date: 1/20/2017 7:47:00 PM
Ohhh Andrea... Such a beauty and this poem is really close to home for me... Since me and hubby got appart after 8 years together - he was affraid to commit! we spent one year appart, but he was my fate... we're together for 29 years - LOVED your poem <3
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Date: 1/20/2017 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 1/19/2017 11:57:00 PM
I honestly thought I already had commented on your poems... sorry that I didn't. These sonnets are incredibly in the sense that they fulfil the requirement so beautifully, and that language you use, I am forever awed. Congratulations :)
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Date: 1/19/2017 8:52:00 PM
Creative, the use of notes exchanged to relay the prompt very well. Congratulations on your placement, Andrea.
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Date: 1/19/2017 8:25:00 PM
I loved the unique take on this and the excellent way in which you so competently adhered to the prescribed form - I once tried to do a back 'n forth like this with a friend of mine but couldn't get her to write b/c she said they were too restrictive so she did free verse instead. I think you've demonstrated, through your wonderful talent, just how versatile the form can be.
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Date: 10/23/2016 7:43:00 AM
Love your iambic mind sis.
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Date: 10/17/2016 8:28:00 AM
Wow, Andrea, the change has made it all the better:)
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Date: 10/17/2016 2:54:00 AM
A very beautiful love poem, Andrea. Written w/such graceful meter and flowing rhythm. Very nicely done in the hand of a true poetess. Great work of art. Very emotive and heartfelt, the sign of when a poetess has touched the reader. Job well done. Much love to you from the RW (Romantic Warrior.)
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Date: 10/16/2016 8:15:00 PM
I don't know how you can make it flow so beautifully and appearing with such ease. I have to admit sonnets are one of my favourites to read, and you are very good at them Andrea. /|\
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/16/2016 8:20:00 PM
thanks so much. They have become second nature to me. I have so many of them and I think in iambic pentameter when I am writing poetry.
Date: 10/16/2016 11:23:00 AM
Very beautiful. I love happy endings.
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Date: 10/16/2016 10:28:00 AM
I hope this has a happy ending, I mean because the writer is really smitten. Love, DAve
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Date: 10/16/2016 10:24:00 AM
This should do well, reads like what he is most likely looking for..I think my entry may be to ethereal for him..good luck
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Date: 10/16/2016 8:37:00 AM
Sonnets filled with the melody of love!....Beautiful write Andrea...
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Date: 10/16/2016 8:36:00 AM
2 lovely sonnets on true love, Andrea:) I like the way you thought about the reply too:)
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Date: 10/16/2016 8:11:00 AM
Like I've said before, one sonnet is a task, two sonnets back to back is a project. nicely done, Andrea. Good luck. I think Phillip will love it.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/16/2016 8:41:00 PM
It was not so hard , DAniel. Once I set my mind to it, it came rather easily!! (but will it win? who knows!)
Date: 10/16/2016 5:48:00 AM
That is so beautiful, Andrea. Definitely +7. Hope it does well in the Contest. Barry.
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Date: 10/16/2016 3:27:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully and tender write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Good luck for the contest.
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Date: 10/16/2016 3:19:00 AM
Getting the goosebumps. I like how both lovers unite in such a gentle note! More congratulations on your many past wins and thank you for commenting.
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Date: 10/16/2016 2:35:00 AM
Forgot to rate you seven.
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Date: 10/16/2016 2:34:00 AM
Wistfully wonderful, two English Sonnets, you've outdone yourself Andrea!
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Date: 10/16/2016 1:34:00 AM
Lovely, tender piece, Andrea, I'm sure it will do exceedingly well. Viv x
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Date: 10/16/2016 1:07:00 AM
I'm glad it has such a happy ending Andrea!!! 2 beautiful sonnets my friend:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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