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True Love Is Such a Beautiful Thing

True love is such a beautiful thing Unequaled in our human emotions Eons ahead of hate and mistrust This feeling of absolute devotion Like no other since the world was new So honoured and tested by time Like a soft summer breeze on a starlit night Like the smell of sweet roses divine Nothing equals the feeling of love Not even sweet chocolate fudge Uh maybe chocolate fudge is pretty close Naw, love's much sweeter, nudge, nudge Ahh, I've thought of something sweeter The smell of a newborn infant Now who could contest that my friends Divine, like it's heaven sent © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 11/1/2013 4:04:00 PM
Charming, simply charming! Always a pleasure to stop in and read the works of "Jack, King of the Quatrain"! Thanks for this! MC
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/1/2013 5:19:00 PM
Great compliment my friend! Thanks! Must drop by and read some of yours! Thanks MC
Date: 10/30/2013 6:56:00 PM
Jack, I believe we are on the same wavelength with this one.... I wrote one and placed in a contest some time ago... You might like "True Love Never Know Why" great writing..... Regards, Jake
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/1/2013 5:26:00 PM
Thank you my friend, I will definitely check out yours! Cheers, Jack
Date: 10/29/2013 10:31:00 AM
Love is much sweeter, indeed. This made me smile sir!
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Date: 10/29/2013 11:29:00 AM
Still thinking about the chocolate fudge thingy! LOL
Date: 10/29/2013 8:32:00 AM
Good morning... A love poem before my coffee?... Well I guess... Why not... Dragons up and creating havoc before my coffee too... LOL... Don't think Dragon OR I am fully awake... But Hubby took some vacation days and has taken over my computer... So it's super duper early or nada... What a crazy life!... Kinda like having a new born around here when Hubby's on vacation... Everyone routine is messed up... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/29/2013 8:35:00 AM
Now you be nice to that guy Mike, ya hear!!! You both have a happy day! xoxox

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