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True Love

A girl asked her husband do you think i'm pretty? Her husband answer noo... The girl stays quiet and asked do you love me? Her husband answer noo... The girl gets tears in her eyes and she is willing to ask one more question DO you think i'm a good wife for you? Husband answered noo... So the girl sadly gets her things ready to leave with her hear broken and then he says baby i dont think your pretty i think your beautiful I dont love you i couldnt live a day without you! I dont think your a good wife ur perfect and i'm the luckiest man i would die without your my heart my soul my life my heart would be full without you it would be crush in pieces! YOUR THE LOVE OF MY LIFE UNTIL DEATH DO US APART.........

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Date: 12/6/2010 9:53:00 AM
so sweet!
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Date: 11/30/2010 3:58:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight with its interesting theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and full of sharing .. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 11/30/2010 2:31:00 PM
you have a great poem but i would check over the spellings and if it makes since before you post it. but other than a couple spelling errors, good job. in a couple weeks you could be the best poet on this website.
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Date: 11/30/2010 9:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Gaby. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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