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True Immortality

From Fragile and dying To Strong and Eternal I walked down this path of dust, I watched my life fade into sand and dusk. Loved ones fall six feet under, Foes weaken and break from time. My undying body strengthens, My eternal soul fades faster each year, decade, century, and millennium. The sovereign curse me and plague me. Death's cold embrace seems non existent. Death her sweet embrace is the only thing i wish, She tells me she'll be there at the end. But how soon is my end? should I follow her or stand and wait as my sun turns red, skies ripped of their blue and oceans turned to sand?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/21/2015 1:55:00 AM
Tiberius, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:16:00 PM
Tiberius, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:04:00 PM
- A good poem, well done - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Tiberius :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:24:00 AM
I liked the day when ”I walked down this path of dust”...because I could see the light arrows from your oem.Best wishes.
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Date: 7/20/2015 12:08:00 AM
This is a terrific piece of free verse, Tiberius. A great start to your time here on Poetry Soup. Welcome. I'm sure that your time here will be fruitful, creative and enjoyable. Regards, Viv
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