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True Hearts Beating

Where will I be twenty years from today? The World is moving at such a fast pace. Will I still look at love the same way? Will I be able to look at your face? That is my heart's greatest desire. The World is moving at such a fast pace. Now when I'm with you my heart is on fire. I wish for my soul to still burn for you. That is my heart's greatest desire. My eyes may grow dimmer I know that's true. A love so beautiful will never fade. I wish for my soul to still burn for you. Even if my body to death is laid. That will never stop my true heart's beating A love so beautiful will never fade. The world may be fast sometimes defeating. That will never stop my true hearts beating. Where will I be twenty years from today? I'll still be looking at love the same way! Valentines Contest

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Date: 2/23/2014 10:20:00 AM
Richard...what a beautiful dream of a poem....a terzanelle....Oh...I'm so glad I found this. To my favorites....Just simply .......enchanting.....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2014 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Eileen! I like this one as well.
Date: 2/11/2013 10:47:00 AM
Richard, , Congratulations with your sweet Valentines poem *luv~PD
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win on this lovely Valentines poem my dear friend, Richard !love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/10/2013 8:33:00 PM
congrats :-) SandyIvy
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Date: 1/5/2013 12:18:00 AM
AWESOME.....I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem.
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Date: 12/15/2012 10:30:00 PM
nicely worded Richard ;}
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2012 12:25:00 AM
Thanks Debbie
Date: 12/12/2012 7:05:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, my friend! There is nothing more to say... love is eternal Warm wishes, Jake
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2012 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Jake!
Date: 12/11/2012 8:49:00 PM
I really like this one Richard...It flows so well...Nice one!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2012 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Dan. I see you have another new Photo, the cool dude is back!
Date: 12/11/2012 1:27:00 PM
I'm sure you'll be looking at love the same way for eternity! A beautiful and lovely write Rick! Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2012 2:27:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia! Hugs back.
Date: 12/11/2012 10:10:00 AM
I can tell you one thing for sure... twenty years will be over in a blink of an eye, good poem, Richard, and yes keep that heart beating, and the pen writing...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2012 2:28:00 PM
Will do, you are right the last 20 evaporated pretty quickly.
Date: 12/11/2012 8:10:00 AM
Great poem, Richard. Thanks for inviting me. i normally don't enter contest but I did it for you. Enjoyed. Love ya, Toquyen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2012 8:17:00 AM
You are very sweet. Thanks as well for your comment.
Date: 12/10/2012 9:25:00 PM
Thank you Richard for the soup mail... I will share my thoughts with you tomorrow when i get home from work.. hope you are well... thank you for this poem..never seen this form on the soup... life makes me wonder always~~..pd
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2012 9:41:00 PM
Yes very well, in an airport on my way home to my sweetie.
Date: 12/10/2012 8:56:00 AM
beautiful thoughts you have, I'm also wondering where will I be in next 20years from now :) hopefully we are in decent place and better life :) - hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2012 9:10:00 AM
sounds like a good plan!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/10/2012 8:59:00 AM
It's a pleasure to be the first to comment :D

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