True Friendship

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~True Friendship~ (Rhyming Couplet) True friends are really a treasure so rare There are not many like that who really care If you happen to have one exactly like that Be happy you got lucky, so toss high your hat Real friends wish to share everything with you, laughter and tears And like finest wine they just get better all throughout the years They will be loyal, honest and true no matter what you may go through A true friend will not hurt you on purpose and she always care for you There are not many good friends around like this they're hard to find Better just have one true than maybe dozens that are untrue and fake in kind So if you already have a true friend consider yourself very lucky everyday And treat well that friend with all the love and respect that(she or he)deserves all way. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 August.30.2015

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/31/2015 4:15:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/18/2015 7:40:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Ravi,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit so very much. You're very kind, thanks again!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/30/2015 12:52:00 PM

So true and a fine poem. All too often true friends are not given their due IMHO. Great poem. A7

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/18/2015 7:39:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Robert,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit so very much. Thanks for the 7 you're very kind.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Dan Cwiak

Date: 8/30/2015 11:23:00 AM

Wonderful tribute to those who we often forget or take for granted. Nicely done. 7

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/18/2015 7:37:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Dan,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit so very much, glad you liked it:) Thanks for the 7 you're very kind.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.