True Friends

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~True Friends~ ( Rhyme ) What a wonderful blessing Is to have a true friend like you Friends are one of the greatest thing To have and that's really true They accept you the way that you are And come from near or far They tell you that they do care True friends are like a bright star They lift you up when you're down And put a smile upon your face They're like beautiful flowers in a vase And friends always fill an empty space They always let you know that they love you And in everything with you they go through. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 September.16.2015

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Robert Nehls

Date: 9/28/2015 7:09:00 AM

Hi Dorian. Very nice poem about friendship. Friends are truly one of the greatest blessings that we have. I enjoyed reading this one.... Robert.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/2/2015 1:42:00 AM

Hi Robert!Thank you ever so kindly again, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem. I do appreciate your visit so very much and I'm so glad that you liked this one also.Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you!:)D.

Denice Dobbs

Date: 9/16/2015 12:22:00 PM

You wrote your poems almost perfectly! I gave you 4 stars! :)