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True Freinds

Our bodies are made of mostly salt water That includes our spouse and rebellious daughter I have a keen notion We belong near the ocean With our true friends, the seal and the otter Maybe that's why we holiday by sea Cause we are drawn to water naturally But where are our fins Flippers, tails and wings Are we all shoals or are we family? Add-on by Belle Bellevue

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/14/2022 6:16:00 PM

For sure we do belong around H2O. I notice that I always feel better after a shower or a swim. ~ Water is Wetter

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/15/2022 7:10:00 PM

It's that 'Eau de H2O' I dab on afterwards. ~ Victoria's Secrets

Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/15/2022 5:54:00 PM

I notice you smell better too!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/14/2022 3:08:00 PM

Hello Robert Gorelick, I yearn to be by the water. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/22/2022 3:03:00 PM

Hello Robert, yes so much water under the bridge. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/22/2022 2:53:00 PM

So much water under the bridge, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2022 1:35:00 PM

Hello Robert, yes the water can be healing. it can be a Bay, stream, a river, a lake. Or ocean or sea. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene

Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/15/2022 5:54:00 PM

The seaside can be very healing Darlene. Thanks for dropping by! Robert

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/14/2022 12:54:00 PM

Maybe that's why we holiday by sea - 'Cause we are drawn to water naturally - But where are our fins - Flippers, tails and wings - Are we all shoals or are we family?…… Belle

Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/15/2022 5:57:00 PM

Another awesome appendage, Belle!