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True Blue Moon

These thoughts are crystal clear in feelings towards a beautiful gem dazzling aurora of lighting color falling into loves sweet everlasting touching a dream The fondest memories come flooding back walking along the golden sands with my dog buster him dancing around floating lovingly on natures breeze Tears begin rolling down the face looking skyward a full moon face in her pearly white attire Winds blowing quite strongly across the ocean touching inner humming whistles Silver reflections of her face shine dancing in each and every single ripple Light of truth is a burning torch forever warm and loving forgiving always to the end is this real I ask myself over and over Watching you sleep smiling deep inwardly beautiful putting my nose to your hair loving how it smells for me baby the sweetest scent of you Knowing smiles upon your angel face this dream is it real pinching myself Sleeping beauty I thought in that moment A fairy tale breathing ever so slowly lowers and rises deep gentle soft fluttering warm breaths as i watch you sleeping One prize for a king who is lucky in love one I spent a while writing, finished it on a walk last night looking at a full moon

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Date: 11/8/2014 9:18:00 AM
Each line is so beautifully expressed and penned, Liam.Your beautiful heart and words sing. Such a wonderful loving masterpiece.One can only wish upon the stars and the moon of heaven for a true love like that, my dear friend. Very romantic and passionate. I enjoyed it! Smiling here :) love and hugs! Xxxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/9/2014 11:30:00 AM
thank you dorian for the truly very beautiful comment the moon and stars are the souls of those i believe the eyes of love looking over us bless you dear friend have a blessed sunday
Date: 11/8/2014 5:03:00 AM
This is very beautiful Liam.The moon can be soinspiring dear friend,lovely!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/8/2014 5:29:00 AM
so sweet thank you so much yeah the moon sure can draw on the deepest feelings when alone dear friend bless you wonderful comment

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