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True Vampires

They come out at night If you catch them you might Be able to see They are also human beings They love and feed But only when they need

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/16/2008 6:59:00 PM
I'm quite busy myself... gaming, randoming around the internet, listening to music :P t'is nearly 3am actually, though me has a gf that loves me anyways... getting engaged over the new year :) but there's somebody for everyone, so dont worry too much about it :P
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Date: 11/18/2008 2:54:00 PM
never trust a vampire or a rattle snake they both bite. WWJD what would jesus do. john
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Date: 11/18/2008 6:53:00 AM
Sweet poem i love vampires super awsome....And srry for not wrighting you back i have been kinda sorta grounded so ya im lucky that the schools computers will let me on here lol hopefully when i get home my cuzin will let me borrow her laptop so i can get on man i hate bein grounded
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Date: 11/17/2008 9:02:00 PM
i like this poem, reminds me of Anne Rice in a way, and sure, i'll never turn down an offer of friendship
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Date: 11/17/2008 9:07:00 AM
Hi Alexz, This is one of the less painless of your writes. Your potential is tremendous if you are willing to believe in yourself and go after the things you want. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/16/2008 4:51:00 PM
i dont have a myspace i do have a facebook though
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Date: 11/16/2008 9:03:00 AM
like this one too. to answer your question im 18 years old...id like to think my writing has gotten better in two years but im hardly the one to judge
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Date: 11/16/2008 8:36:00 AM
Alexz, are you male or female; I never thought to ask. Please don't take offence if male. I have a distinct feminine side, myself. At any rate, makes no difference. I like your stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 11/16/2008 4:40:00 AM
Alexz....everyone's friend. Love this one Alexz. I go for humor every time. As for my son....I don't think he bothers with poetry. He free lances on clarinet in San Francisco area. My poetry is spastic....I try to stay away from religion and the love lorn, as you'll see by my latest submission. Love, daver
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