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Trudy

Trudy left on a Friday night all she had she held to tight Got on a bus and left that day, neighbors glad she went away Arrived at the station in the middle of the night The big lights of London looked so bright Big city starry night wish mum could see me tonight She felt like a princess of the night. The bastard man that ruined her life Had run away with her fathers’ wife To go back now would be a defeat To stay hear have fun would be a real treat Hand in hand she went in tow Where it was leading no one would know The first hits free and it feels so fine The second one costs and your addicted for time Pimped and punched from pillar to post And by the ones she loved the most No men ever knew her name But they paid there money all the same Trudy died on a Friday night she had nothing to hold on tight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/7/2016 11:43:00 PM
Robert T., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2016 11:37:00 AM
deep write, Robert,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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