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In despair I cling to a barren oak As eve- long screams without any command; And though fingers grip blooms around my cloak Doubt lingers on inside this heart quite bland-- Where misty rain taps upon deadened leaves That boughs quake on drizzles trickling slow, slow Until pale of anguish the moonlight relieves: Perhaps I sense fresh April winds that blow On a field of daisies growing plump roots-- Surely I could not weaken as life blesses New springtime calling for hope, for pursuits-- My essence unleashing this dreariness. Now, the song of a thousand dappled beams Empowers me as glittered morn redeems! Bridge Over Troubled Waters Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton 5/20/2020

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Date: 5/21/2020 2:17:00 PM
Wow Nette, this poem is brilliant! Congratulations on your second placement! xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2020 12:15:00 AM
Dropping by to congratulate you on your win Nette :)
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Date: 5/20/2020 5:42:00 PM
Such a beautiful sonnet, Nette--especially the couplet. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:58:00 PM
Only you Nette can write like this, I love your unique phrasing, has a special tone and cadence, almost melodic...a wonderful write, congrats on a fine 2nd place win!
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Date: 5/20/2020 7:19:00 AM
This is quite beautifully expressed. I love the words~!!! Much love and blessings to you sweet lady, Gina
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Date: 5/20/2020 12:25:00 AM
Blissful sonnet with all the blessings of joy. All the best Nette :)
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Date: 5/19/2020 5:21:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Nette, good luck in the contest. Hope you're well Tom
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Date: 5/19/2020 4:24:00 PM
A beautiful poem Nette. I think it is a winner in the contest.
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