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Trouble In Paradise

I once knew a man from the city Whose girlfriends were all very pretty He did live a charmed life Till found out by his wife Where she kicked him at was a pity!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/9/2010 3:23:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Deb. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:24:00 AM
Lol, ouch, well it was a pity but must have been a laugh for her, so much for his charm lol, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:17:00 AM
LOL I think he deserved this kick, Deb. Very funny limerick! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:11:00 AM
cute one, much enjoyed this morning
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