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Trouble Knocks

Have you ever been caught Between a rock and hard place Have you ever had to look Adversity in the face Or have you led an easy life Where the roads is smooth and wide have your doors been held open Has there always been a guide What will you ever do If trouble knocks on your door Gives you eviction notice If there's less instead of more Will you start to crumble From the force of the blast Are you made of better stuff A substance that's made to last One day we'll all be tested Even those with silver spoons Some are more resilient Others pop like pricked balloons It's better to have hardships Much earlier in your days So that you will have the strength To turn your trouble away We think that we want easy I think that is a mistake We become so much stronger With each and every mistake Between a rock and hard place There is gold there to be found Not often will you find it Just out laying on the ground Embrace each situation We're purified by fire If it doesn't burn us up We will be lifted higher

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/2/2013 9:48:00 AM
Very nice poem. Well done.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 12:56:00 PM
Thanks Matthew
Date: 5/28/2013 11:54:00 PM
You deliver such wise messages with ease, it seems. I've been told to see your goals high above your comfort zone... that way you will know the true boundaries of your limits. Like the hot air balloon metaphor in last quatrain... great stuff!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 12:56:00 PM
Thats good advice.
Date: 5/28/2013 1:26:00 PM
Preach on, brother! ;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2013 1:35:00 PM
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Date: 5/28/2013 12:16:00 PM
I know it's a cliche, but i've come to understand that there is a measure of wisdom that comes with age, although I still have much to learn. What you've written goes far in explaining the nature of hardship, whatever form it takes... Jack
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2013 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Jack, I do believe facing hardships imparts wisdom. With time we will face our share of hardships. I appreciate the comment Jack.
Date: 5/28/2013 10:58:00 AM
very inspirational in many ways.take care
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2013 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Colleen.

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