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Trophy Wife

I watch your riveting sonatas Layer decadent truffles Upon his pupils Leaking wanton tears Grasping for serenity To have epilogue’s slow dance You latch onto love’s empty façade. No return flights to your destination. Where are YOUR wings, angel? An embedded hunger for him To treat you like a priceless prayer But, his knees are too decrepit to kneel in your temple. Yet, you stay… …stay Your freedom becomes latched Onto tortured leeches Sucking You Dry It’s the closest you ever Come To his flesh You stare out towards melancholic branches Cracking in unison outside your bedroom window Under Gemini moon A gripping slide of your fingertips Against convex glass Craving for encore Of that night emptiness filled your lungs with lustful whisper But, now, Pandora’s Box is your only translator Held by the skeletons in his closet With your name written against necklace’s recycled parchment As the one they blame For being a silver medal When will it be your time to shine? ©Drake J. Eszes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/25/2014 2:03:00 PM
When it comes to love I am okay with being the silver medalist as I prefer for her to come first.
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Date: 8/28/2013 10:08:00 AM
Awesome write Drake,,,, very nice. Reminds me of City of Angels movie with Nick Cage & Meg Ryan. Love your poem ;} thank you for liking my Floodgates ;}
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Poet Tacito
Date: 8/28/2013 10:14:00 AM
Ahhh, that Alanis Morrisette track from the movie's soundtrack. "Uninvited"...yes. Good call and thank you for stopping by, once again, Debbie! =D
Date: 8/26/2013 10:54:00 AM
Had to read it again!!!! So beautiful, Drake. Hey.....my latest poem is SO long but I can't seem bothered to work on it. Any ideas on how I can clean it up???? Thanks for the visits... I've missed ya.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/26/2013 11:49:00 AM
Sounds like a plan...I mean, don't sweat it, but...if between reading poetry, and running your computer game business, and all the things you do, you have a few spare minutes....help me out! ;)
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Poet Tacito
Date: 8/26/2013 11:05:00 AM
:) I'll take a look. Maybe SoupMail me next time before you post it, if in doubt? :)
Date: 8/22/2013 10:54:00 AM
"Amazing poem!.its heart touching"
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Poet Tacito
Date: 8/22/2013 12:11:00 PM
Hi & Thank you so very much, Jessica! Great to meet you!
Date: 8/18/2013 11:55:00 PM
Drake, please check your soupmail!
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Poet Tacito
Date: 8/19/2013 12:12:00 AM
Done. :)
Date: 8/14/2013 8:08:00 PM
I don't know what to say now..the way you described a Trophy wife. .I kept thinking over this..great , wonderful and stupendous ..what else should I say ..cheers !
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Date: 8/14/2013 10:03:00 PM
I think you said quite a bit, actually. =) Thank you so so so much!!! =D I'm really happy you stopped by!
Date: 8/12/2013 9:57:00 AM
A wife always needs to be her own person and not put in a place that is not of her choosing. Lovely poem!! Betty
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Poet Tacito
Date: 8/12/2013 10:10:00 AM
Precisely. :) Thank you so very much, Betty!
Date: 8/7/2013 4:01:00 PM
Aww...so sad. Oddly enough I had a dream of a woman--she seemed to be a trophy wife.. this is so beautiful Drake! This type of stuff frustrates me. I was in a relationship--he treated me merely as a trophy-- and I couldn't stand it. We're friends today and we respect each other thankfully. This brings back a couple of memories. Very awesome one. Always, Laura
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Poet Tacito
Date: 8/7/2013 4:04:00 PM
Yes, it frustrates me to no end either. I've met quite a few like that. Sadly, they take it...and stay. Pity, really. Thank you so much, Laura. =D
Date: 8/3/2013 4:17:00 PM
DD as always, again, your words mesmerized me :))
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Date: 8/3/2013 4:34:00 PM
MY PS!!!!! =D Thank you so much.
Date: 7/31/2013 6:46:00 AM
Simply brilliant! The sadness and loneliness of both the husband and wife shine through.
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/31/2013 7:06:00 AM
Monterey! Thanks so much. Yes, sadness of BOTH the husband & wife, indeed. Well said.
Date: 7/30/2013 8:54:00 PM
Had to read this one as I know a few trophy wives and it angers me so to see the humility these men put their wives through you poem is an awesome message to trophy wives to read your lines and see their true life,, great write well done spot on, blessings to you sueellen
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Date: 7/30/2013 9:36:00 PM
Indeed, as do I. Frustrates me too, at times. Thank you so very much, Sue-Ellen!!!! Really nice of you to stop by!
Date: 7/30/2013 1:25:00 PM
Great title, Jake You really tap into the world around you and describe it with truth and intuitive instinct. You are a fav poet and a real friend to me. Suz
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/30/2013 1:31:00 PM
Hey there, Suz! =) Thank you very, very much for that.
Date: 7/29/2013 2:44:00 PM
just been reading through some of your free verse and I'm very impressed! and this is a well written piece with some striking lines, powerful depiction of a somewhat soulless scenario (some alliteration for you there haha) :)
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Date: 7/29/2013 2:45:00 PM
HAHAH! It's all good. Hi & thank you, Charlotte! =D It's great to see you back around again!
Date: 7/29/2013 12:10:00 PM
Outstanding portrayal of this phenomena. I don't know what fullfilment there could ever be in being willing to compromise life for the perception of wealth and status... you put the reality in ugh
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/29/2013 1:17:00 PM
Hey Karen!!!!!! =D I really don't know either...other than a very false sense of security. Thank you so very much!!! It's great to see you here again!
Date: 7/29/2013 9:34:00 AM
Drake; This is just awesome. I sometimes wonder why a woman stays on, or anybody for that fact. I think that sometimes - people are just afraid of being alone. Whatever it is - we humans just tend to complicate our lives. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/29/2013 9:39:00 AM
The common reasons are loneliness, lacking of self-confidence, etc. We don't believe enough in ourselves to deserve better. People want to "work things out". But, lets face it, it rarely works. And, if it does work, there's usually a very high price. True love shouldn't ever have such a high price. But, what do I know? Thank you so much, Lucilla! =)
Date: 7/29/2013 9:27:00 AM
"But, his knees are too decrepit to kneel in your temple" - You come up with such killer lines. There are always lines in your poems that jump right out at me, but that one really stuck. Awesome job!!
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Date: 7/29/2013 9:32:00 AM
Howdy, Heather! =D Thank you so much. I do what I can. Great to see you here!!!
Date: 7/28/2013 7:30:00 PM
You have an amazing way with words Drake...really enjoyed reading this poem...excellent!!! :) cherie,,,
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/28/2013 8:41:00 PM
Many thanks, Cherie. :) I do appreciate that!!!
Date: 7/28/2013 5:09:00 PM
SAD, but real...your line, "...An embedded hunger for him.." makes me wonder if it's truly a "hunger" for him or for his money...or power...or bad boy looks??? As you know, we women can be complicated, my dear...many times I am mystified, myself. Great job, yet, again! Always, Annalise
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/28/2013 5:12:00 PM
I get quite mystified too. Thankfully, not all are this bad. =) But, how rare that is...The "hunger" could be for the things you mention. But, more so, it's more about the mere presence of him. Thank you so much, Annelise!
Date: 7/28/2013 1:43:00 PM
I wrote a poem like this but I'm going to throw mines away, just joking I never wrote a poem any where near this one this is why I'm a reader of poetry not a writer. Excellnet poem poet.
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/28/2013 2:21:00 PM
Ha! I'm glad you were kidding. =) I really appreciate that, Sean. Thanks for coming by here!
Date: 7/28/2013 12:20:00 PM
So descriptive and enticing to read. I want to say.. this muse does not know what she is missing.
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/28/2013 2:20:00 PM
Hey, Kim!!! =D You couldn't be more right about that. Thank you so much!!!
Date: 7/28/2013 11:04:00 AM
This is excellent, I would be happy to hold the Silver medal in my hand.
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/28/2013 2:16:00 PM
I hear that, Richard. =) Thanks so much!
Date: 7/28/2013 11:01:00 AM
okay,okay... i'm stretching the deadline for your new piece, lol... will soupy you soon!.. how was your day, trophy man?..:) huggs
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/28/2013 2:16:00 PM
HAHAHAH! Thanks! A Nette Reprieve! So grateful! My weekend was filled with food, games, & laughter. Not much more I could ask for.
Date: 7/28/2013 11:00:00 AM
Hi Drake, please see my response to your comment on Monterey's poem. I hope this helps make sense of my comment. Monterey and I had exchanged soup mails earlier today and she was not offended by my post but was appreciative of the feed back.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/29/2013 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Drake
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/28/2013 2:14:00 PM
Honestly, I hadn't even read your comment on her piece. I just commented based on what I read. :) It certainly sparked something awesome in my mind. You're always awesome, Richard. I don't believe I'll have to worry about it otherwise with you.
Date: 7/28/2013 2:01:00 AM
You wrote this very well my dear friend, Drake. A perfect and excellent poem that really shines like you. I read it both oral & silent & goes perfectly. You're one of my faves. I'm so impressed. Free verse poems are really hard for me to write but you're doing it really so great. Thank you so much for sharing! I'll come back & read more. Thanks a lot for your visit on my poems. I'm so sorry if I just came now because of hectic schedule; but I'll come back ok. Gud luck! love lots & big hugs, LG
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/28/2013 7:46:00 AM
Hey there, Leonora! That's awesome of you to say! =) Don't worry about how long it takes to comment on something. We all have lives. =) It happens! You stopped by here, that was really cool of you. I'm grateful for that. Thanks so much!
Date: 7/27/2013 5:51:00 PM
sunday is rest .. meaning, will i relish something fresh tomorrow?.. stay fine and thanks for coming by, drake..:) huggs
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/27/2013 7:31:00 PM
Lol. Not tomorrow, but probably Tuesday or something. :) Thank you so much, darling Nette.
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