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Trixy

Long blonde hair impulse stare Leather jacket metal glare ruby lips skin fair wicked dreams selfish cares heated talk simple mind cold front out of time rancid couch clammy heels dusty snout wheels and deals tricksy miss sticky legs long limbs phone rings air still cant walk cant feel cloudy haze crazy mess cold sweats all bets all time lost chain lost mind out of time outta time -Jess

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Date: 10/22/2011 6:14:00 PM
I like the short lines of this one. What was the dusty snout? I imagined a dog by her couch! Or maybe she was snorting cocaine? That's how the last part made me feel. LEt me see another poem.
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Date: 10/21/2011 9:10:00 AM
cool poem love the form p.d.
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