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Trixie Went On Vacation

My muse went on vacation to the Eiffel Tower and more. My private detectives snapped her photo in a Bolivia convenience store. She travelled by alligator, flea, train, jet, and finally mountain goat. I tried to catch up, but she was too clever, and that’s all she wrote. I caught glimpses of her in Ireland, England, Belgium and Spain. She was caught caterwauling in Finland, and dancing in Monaco’s rain. My muse is not the kind to sit idle, rocking or knitting. She went everywhere I myself would have never deemed fitting. I waited for a week, then six and finally half a year. She had to be replaced, even though she had been extremely dear. I have a new muse named Zeke who wakes me up at night in bed. He smacks me not so gently with a rock in the side of my head.

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Date: 9/15/2020 8:53:00 AM
Dear Zeke, please take care of Caren...no more rocks when a wheelbarrow of words will do...she'll know how to put them together with glue :D Jeanne
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/15/2020 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne. I hope this moronic handsy barbarian listens to OUCH!
Date: 9/14/2020 8:00:00 PM
Some really memorable lines here, Caren. Like 'a Bolivian convenience store.' Such an ingenious creation!... And then there's Zeke: Sounds like Zeke and you will have a few holy wars before you straighten him out. (I'm assuming Zeke is male; I suppose that I have no right to do that anymore. Please forgive me...) :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/15/2020 12:28:00 PM
I have to tell you he is every bit as bad as Trixie, maybe worse.

Book: Shattered Sighs