Triped

today I saw a dog he was missing a leg suddenly like out of the blue a tear was hobbling his infirmity has reminded to me how much ... you are missing to myself

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/18/2016 5:56:00 PM

An interestingly amusing piece!

Gitlan George
Date: 4/19/2016 4:31:00 PM

thanks man!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2013 5:59:00 PM

Gitlan, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Wishing you the best this new coming week. Take care :-) Linda

Gitlan George
Date: 4/19/2016 4:30:00 PM

thank you, Linda!!! ;)

Nikola Žilic

Date: 3/21/2013 7:59:00 AM

This just baffled me, a dog missing a leg, just as you miss her? Such powerful imagination...sarcasm...sarcasm... Think about it.

Gitlan George
Date: 3/21/2013 9:47:00 AM

thank you man!!!