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Trip To the Er

Enter the cavernous chamber Met by the paperwork__you know the clipboard Enter all this information first right here Remember we need address, SS#__So we can trace you Good we've got all that so now we'll treat you Enter the little room with a I don't care nurse Now I want to know what would equal good care Care that would keep you coming back Yeah! We want return visits not wellness Room without view Occupied by much equipment Opposite of home's comfort Much anxiety

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Date: 6/21/2010 8:36:00 PM
ah, anxiety, my worst enemy.. and if this is about you. Sara, i will send my prayers to you. ~As always a poet friend, Lynette
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Date: 6/19/2010 3:55:00 PM
anxiety...at least you did not have the stones...lol
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Date: 6/19/2010 3:04:00 PM
Ouch! I hate the ER department. I love Grey's Anatomy but only because of the handsome beefcake roaming the hall of that ER. Ha! Hope this poem is fiction. Well wishes of mine go out to you and your family after reading this poem.
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:49:00 AM
A very different take on the emergency room Sara, I like it. Have a great weekend >> James
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:35:00 AM
Great write, them old doctor shops are not a fun place and want all your money before they let you die? Thanks on EYES yes a rank story but a true one I will be in court next week and they will try to do the same thing to me...but no problem my lawyer is God and he will take the ruling to his court...keep me in your prayers...thanks Danny
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Date: 6/17/2010 7:57:00 PM
U set a perfect scene Sara and a great Acrostic form choice to share these words.. enjoyed .. with luv Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/17/2010 4:24:00 PM
It's horrid I remember...when I broke my leg...I was literally holding it together with my hands & getting almost no attention, certainly no pain killers GAH!!!!! BIG HUGS!
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Date: 6/17/2010 4:04:00 PM
I understand exactly good write!
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Date: 6/17/2010 1:59:00 PM
Nice one Sara, chuckles to the way you entered the E.R. and know exactly what to expect,..p.d.
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