Trinity

I have slipped into the sorrow and now I climb back out. I foresee a great tomorrow when I will feel no doubt. Many times I reach the border where words do pass and fade. I rest my head on golden shoulder and hear my serenade. Quiet eyes do love me surely. The gentle holds my hand. See how light can shine so purely. I hope I understand. Presence I have known forever, in one where once was three. The secret to eternal life is just Him, You, and Me.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/19/2009 2:33:00 PM

Dear Yoni, I think we are of kindred Spirit I have a POEM " Trinity in Haiku " But to YOUR disappointment I again used the name of Jesus YOU are a very well versed POET Marvelous Write Yes : Black is Hatred, anger, sorrow, loneliness, pain and Death RED -- LOVE Yes the Tears are Blood in my "The Birth of a Black Heart" and this POEM is the beginning of my " the POETS' Heart -- Speaks (Part 4) Yet to be posted ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Date: 2/26/2009 4:38:00 PM

What an inspirational and uplifting poem. Nice use of rhyme. Keep on writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/21/2009 5:52:00 PM

Dear Yoni, another great poem! I love the image conveyed in the second stanze, "rest my head on golden shoulder and hear my serenade." And the last four lines are spiritually inspiring. Love, Carolyn

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/11/2009 12:59:00 PM

Oh wow, this read is so cool! love the easy flow and the true deep meaning within this. Keep em coming! Michael

Sara Lokken

Date: 2/9/2009 5:14:00 PM

This is very inspirational....and beautifully rhymed. I've been running from religion, but I believe in God....I'm just really confused right now, I guess...but I'm not stupid enough to say I don't need Him. I'm just too dark or have seen too much too soon to fit into that whole church equation thing. I appreciate all your comments....you seem very 'real'.....Best wishes, Sara:)

Donna Newton

Date: 2/8/2009 6:26:00 PM

I like too

Donna Newton

Date: 2/8/2009 6:19:00 PM

RE: the ultimate sin---- married or you are of christian faith!........wink...)

Derrick Burton

Date: 2/7/2009 8:41:00 AM

great poetry and beautiful words. Really loved how you just used your amagination and pushed this poetry forward. enjoyed reading it and have a blessed day.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/6/2009 5:39:00 PM

This is very lovely, quiet and lovely. ~ Carrie

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/6/2009 4:30:00 PM

Yoni - this is an excellent Quatrain - I loved the ending - i want to let you know I received your email and asap I'll make a PDF of the poems and shoot them to you - Antoinette is my wife in case you were wondering about my address - God Bless, MJ