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Trickles

evening is silent as gust trickles on asphalt ruffling umbrellas --- fingers in coiled position grasp steel rod not letting go

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Date: 1/31/2016 1:04:00 PM
Lovey descriptive tanka Ashley - I have not used a brolly for many years it is too too windy on our Island and I see a 'graveyard' of torn material and spikes so i just use my waterproof coat these days:-) hugs Jan xx
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