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Trickle Down

Water flowing down cascading it goes bouncing over rocks laughing gleefully swirling so fast down the mill trickles through pipes rushing out into a pool flowing onwards sea bound relentless journey from source down to the ocean gathering body getting mighty until it flows mingling with salt its journey ended written 07/17/2013 contest: Trickle Down Free Verse

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John Ginesi

Date: 7/19/2013 11:09:00 AM

Hi Linda, it was a lovely journey from the source to the sea, you tell it so well. John

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/19/2013 4:53:00 PM

ty John for comments Shadow x smiles

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/19/2013 9:59:00 AM

One can almost compare this to tears, too. Beautiful job.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/19/2013 4:53:00 PM

hi Drake glad it moved you Shadow x smiles

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/18/2013 4:32:00 PM

Well crafted nature poem here. You might want to send poetry to "The Avocet" which is a poetry mag - and website featuring nature poems. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/19/2013 4:52:00 PM

hi Ty Matthew glad you enjoyed I am sending some off will look into Avocet too Shadow x smiles

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/17/2013 11:14:00 PM

Excellent. Very creative work. Enjoyed. Tfs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/18/2013 12:07:00 PM

hi Ravi and ty so much most inspirational Shadow x smiles

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 7/17/2013 10:59:00 PM

Very creative my friend.Good luck in the contest

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/18/2013 12:08:00 PM

dearest M.M that means so much and ty for gl Love Shadow x smiles

Donna Jones

Date: 7/17/2013 8:52:00 PM

Ahhh-great idea and great poem....good luck....

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/18/2013 12:09:00 PM

hi Donna ty for reading glad you like Shadow x smiles

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/17/2013 1:53:00 PM

.... a long journey. - A enjoyable poem to read, Shadow. - I wish you good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/17/2013 7:54:00 PM

ty Anne Lise glad you enjoyed ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2013 1:08:00 PM

I need to check this contest out..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading my work and taking time to comment...Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/17/2013 7:56:00 PM

hi Sara a fun contest ty for nice remarks and gl Shadow x smiles