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Trick Le Down

If I am the sheep But the lord is your shepherd The farm is corporate ***

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 5/13/2022 12:42:00 AM

This is sweeeeeet Maureen. Don't make me think- I'm trying to retire PLUS you know me & thinking mixed together is a dangerous thing. I hope you don't mind. I took the liberty to write my own poem: "treacle tart"/ i is the sheep/ the landlord is your shepherd/ down on orwell's corporate farm//. Maureen. I hope it's true what they say about immitation & flattery. Maybe I'm just a sheep in wolves clothing. Reverse that. Repeat. HUGS...

Jeff Connelly
Date: 5/13/2022 8:20:00 PM

Jajaja Maureen... THIS Sunday: FULL "super" MOON & Total Lunar Eclipse wiiiiii...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/13/2022 7:21:00 AM

I’m a wolf tart, howling at the moon. ~x

Anil Deo

Date: 5/7/2022 10:32:00 AM

We need to listen to you ... I try. Your brains way too sexy for me. But I can't stop loving you. Unless I find greener pastures, exploding fountains O im gushing 4 my wife. ThanX a stack, Mo. Great feedback

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/13/2022 7:19:00 AM

LAUGH OUT LOUD ;D, All I know for a fact is that I am too small to know. ~x

Anil Deo
Date: 5/7/2022 4:20:00 PM

Yes, Mo You're never wrong about the Universe. Only spelling, occasionally

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/7/2022 12:48:00 PM

It’s sooo fascinating! It’s like, you can’t use my words against me because I’m using my words against you! If I can assume anything, it’s that we are the laughing stock of the universe. So much potential, so much potential. ;), xomo!

John Lawless

Date: 5/6/2022 11:53:00 AM

I am seriously LAUGHING OUT LOUD....this is, as we so improperly say in Boston, "WICKED PISSA". The title to a follow up ..... "Angels in the bored room"

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/6/2022 12:46:00 PM

…my mother stank, but she did teach me that as well, didn’t follow her own teachings is all, now I LOL ;),

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/6/2022 12:28:00 PM

Enchanté! I’ll have a slice. I hear sinners make the best saints. xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/6/2022 11:32:00 AM

But Star Wars teaches us the Force is always with us but everyone wants to change its direction. Mankind always knows better than its god what is best for mankind, or is that twinkle-down theory? Happy to see you have found other things to do than sit in traffic! Aloha!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/6/2022 12:26:00 PM

I liked Star Wars but I loved Star Trek, I follow The Prime Directive always. btw, I avoid traffic like the plague, especially during this plague… my butt is parked in the park. xomo

John Lawless
Date: 5/6/2022 11:55:00 AM

and Flower the Skunk's mother told us "if you can't say something nice, then don't say anything at all". (From the Book of Bambi)

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/6/2022 8:52:00 AM

Oui oui petite mademoiselle, but only if your a sheep, you is a wolf! super Mo, but be careful they don’t release the hounds, cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/6/2022 10:56:00 AM

Merci mon ami! Wolves are a remarkable species, and very persecuted. Having been taught the teachings of Jesus, being set upon by hounds does not strike me as being very christian like; but I suppose that is the meaning of this prose. Cheers xomo

Jeff Kyser

Date: 5/6/2022 7:47:00 AM

We all, like sheep, have gone astray. Some hear His voice, return his way. Corporate, yes, we are his body. Led to still water, not barren wadis.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/6/2022 12:44:00 PM

Thank you Jeff. Theology and human nature have always fascinated me. I personally lean more towards the Goddess, The Creator and Panpsychism, but Jesus taught me well how to love all.