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Trembles and Thrills

Trembles and thrills Calm as sea waters lay my subtle emotions, Heart had snubbed its throb, as eyes stared into zero, Tears constantly slid to blend. Those warm breaths on neck, His touch sent shuddering tides, Skin to skin embrace set my withering beats rise, Passion storm coerced within. Butterflies fluttered, Thousand petals unfolded, Ocean sent quivers as alluring waves enticed, Moon dressed us silvery white. Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7 Written Dec 11th, 2015 For contest "Trembles and thrills" by Olive

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Date: 12/20/2015 12:46:00 AM
Dr Upma, awesome win. Linda
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:31:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Dr. Upma, a good fit for the theme of the contest. (^_^)
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:08:00 PM
Dr Upma, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT
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Date: 12/19/2015 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on a great write Dr, Sharma enjoyed very much!!
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:48:00 AM
A lovely, gentle piece, Dr Upma, much enjoyed it. well done. Viv x
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:28:00 AM
Dr. Upma, ***I agree that even the saddest memories brings TREMBLES and THRILLS, I read your poems as single strings but they contain and lures to encapsulate the theme… I enjoyed the ride you placed me while I'm reading this… Imagery is here too!!! BIG CONGRATULATIONS! I thank you for participating!!~ Hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 12/11/2015 1:39:00 PM
Wonderful imagery for 'trembles and thrills,' Dr. Upma. Beautifully done. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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