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Trembles and Thrills

Trembles and Thrills, from a frozen delight into my tummy, brain freeze from eating ice cream Its yummy a thrill, my tummy trembles from taste Vanilla, Chocolate, pistachio, are my faves when placed on a cone, I shove it into my mouth The flavors of my taste buds, I'll eat them every day Passing a truck, with music that plays its antique, reminding me of summers long ago to hear is like a symphony, a concert on wheels I run till I catch it, out of breath I am huffing and puffing, my heart races at top speed I caught it, yes I did now I can breathe deeply Trembles and thrills, I'm eating ice cream Please don't ever finish, you are so delicious The satisfaction inside, causing trembles and thrills

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/20/2015 12:48:00 AM
Tiffany, awesome win. Linda
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:10:00 PM
Tiffany, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT
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Date: 12/19/2015 6:02:00 AM
Yummy Yummy Tifffany congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:59:00 AM
Scrumptious write, Tiffany, well done. And mind how you cross the road. Viv x
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:37:00 AM
Tiffany, *** I love how you presented the theme just I couldn't place this higher or mention it as HM, I like best the 2nd to the last stanza,,kudos! Thanks for participating!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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