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Trembles and Thrills

Trembles and Thrills I was thrilled, trembled. Toy car rushed with cracking sound. Playful childhood ran. I wished only to buy toys. I grew old, lost interest. I was thrilled, trembled. I was placed top in school exam. High rank was the aim. Competition continued I got thrilled on every win My first love thrilled me. I was trembled on first kiss. Romance came in life. I chose my life long partner. Parenthood appeared in thrill. Old age knocked at door. All attractions have ended. I am just waiting. New thrills and trembles will come I will greet my Divine Death. 11/08/15 Tanka Form 5 lines a stanza Syllable count 5-7-5-7-7 Contest Trembles and Thrills Second Place Sponsor Olive Eloisa

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 12:46:00 AM

Anisha, awesome win. Linda

Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/20/2015 1:33:00 AM

Thanks Linda. Love. Anisha D

Skat A

Date: 12/19/2015 2:07:00 PM

Anisha, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT

James Inman

Date: 12/19/2015 3:57:00 AM

A lifetime of thrills, Anisha, nicely done.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/19/2015 11:58:00 AM

Thanks James for appreciation

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/19/2015 2:43:00 AM

Great write, Anisha, and love the suitably foeboding ending. Congrats! Viv

Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/19/2015 12:00:00 PM

Thanks Viv for feedback Best Wishes. Anisha D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/19/2015 2:25:00 AM

Anisha, I notice the format of this, waves of trembles and thrills woven through the lines..***You touched most of the situations where the theme is known, felt and experience… Each one can stand to present the theme… Big Congratulations! I thank you for participating!!! ~Hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/19/2015 11:24:00 AM

Thanks Olive as you have minutely gone thru poem. Thanks again for your appreciation. Anisha D

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 11/8/2015 11:54:00 PM

Vry thrilling indeed,...good day...regards

Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/9/2015 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Rizwana. Best Wishes....Anisha D

Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2015 4:33:00 PM

Hope your life is full of trembles and thrills Anisha - lovely descriptive write for the contest - good luck :-) hugs jan xx