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Trees

Trees whisper Secrets untold summer wind picnic lunch A Lovers kiss A childs embrace

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Samuel Otieng

Date: 8/14/2018 8:58:00 AM

Wonderful write Carmen.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 8/29/2014 7:27:00 PM

I like to read poems about trees and nature. This one says a lot in a few words. I like to hug a tree and have it whisper to me in its own language.

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 8/29/2014 7:48:00 PM

Thank you :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/29/2014 6:36:00 PM

love the image of the whispering trees here:-) hugs janxx

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 8/29/2014 7:48:00 PM

Thank you :)

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 8/29/2014 7:46:00 PM

Thank you ??

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/29/2014 6:18:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem very much.l Don't think it is a haiku though.. You nailed the secrets kept by trees ...BG

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 8/29/2014 7:46:00 PM

thank you