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Tree Spriit

Miniscule shadow Beneath the blue clouded sky Hides spirit of tree

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/27/2009 4:52:00 PM

gentle and soft as the view! Light & Love

Lena Pate

Date: 8/1/2009 4:08:00 PM

Nicely written. Thought provoking and original. Here you show that even the mighty oak has a beginning and a whimsical soul.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/24/2009 8:51:00 PM

I love this spiritual capture of Raul's picture! Cecil! a winner!!! jim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2009 10:58:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Cecil! I'm sure you'll do well in the contest with this great write. Love, Carolyn

Date: 6/26/2009 12:09:00 PM

Wow! I really like the perspective in this one. The last line is my favorite. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend! Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/26/2009 12:52:00 AM

Thanks for supporting my contest Cecil...Raul

Hyle Chu

Date: 6/25/2009 11:27:00 PM

5, 7, 5. I just tried one. I felt so restricted. I never thought of it that way: the way a shadow can be a spirit.