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Treats of Country Living

My children couldn't believe their luck, Down the drive came a McDonald's truck! their eyes lit up thinking of treats to sup Alas, truck had come - septic tank to suck. Written 25 August 2018 Real story Submitted to 'Fool me once' Contest by Brenda Chiri

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Date: 4/6/2019 12:29:00 PM
LOL, funny, Virginia.
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Date: 9/6/2018 1:58:00 AM
Hello Virginia … short but not very sweet. On closer inspection, on the truck it wasn't spelt 'MuckDonalds was it - catch you soon Virginia - Lindsay
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Date: 9/4/2018 5:51:00 AM
Good take on the contest, Virginia. Congrats on your placement....Charlie
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Virginia Waters
Date: 9/5/2018 11:54:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 9/3/2018 5:33:00 PM
HILARIOUS. Great! Love it, Virginia. Hope you win the contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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Virginia Waters
Date: 9/5/2018 11:51:00 PM
Thanks Gershon.
Date: 8/29/2018 12:02:00 PM
I think this a perfect entry on the theme, Virginia! - and it sure gave me a chuckle! Good Luck
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Virginia Waters
Date: 9/5/2018 11:49:00 PM
thank you - these contests recall so many gem moments
Date: 8/25/2018 12:49:00 AM
a funny short poem.Enjoyed reading it.
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/25/2018 3:36:00 AM
thanks !

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