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Treasures of Your Soul

In the depths of midnight the sky shows off That which plays within the glows of the moon Harvest yellow casting down on the grass Deep in my heart this hallowed soul has swoon So shocked of this sight, the moon at midnight Complete with its piece of the raven small Proudly displayed this clearing beams tonight And light of the moon fills this space for all This tender light that shines on such a bird Brings me in awe and bewilderment fast I thank the Lord for all his blessings shown This well-manicured spot found at long last The last piece of this romance inspired thought Is her presence, what’s written on a scroll No harvest moon and no midnight raven Can take place of the treasure of my soul
Russell Sivey Contest: Treasures Of Your Soul Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle 7/29/2013

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Date: 8/21/2013 4:42:00 PM
very nice Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/21/2013 11:49:00 AM
great one Russell.wonderful! congrats on a great win.(:c Jenish
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Date: 8/21/2013 8:00:00 AM
Dear Russell, it is a nice romantic thought. , Impressive poem! All I can do is imagine the beauty from the soul.. WOW! What a treasure... Congratulations with the beauty from your heart... always a FAN.... Linda
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Date: 8/20/2013 8:49:00 PM
Hello Russell, congratulations... xox~ SKAT
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Date: 8/20/2013 7:42:00 PM
enjoyed your pen Russell hope all is well? congrats on your excellent win Shadow x smile
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Date: 7/30/2013 6:17:00 AM
Smooth transition of thoughts Russell.It reads like a melody.All in all I loved this poem from you.All the best in the contest.
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Date: 7/30/2013 12:10:00 AM
I love the raven you put into this poem. It made it cool, russell.
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Date: 7/29/2013 5:00:00 PM
I especially liked the last stanza,. Russell. LOVELY.
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Date: 7/29/2013 9:25:00 AM
Romantic work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Soup mail..Sara
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Date: 7/29/2013 8:34:00 AM
How beautiful. Those last 2 lines hit home for me. Wonderful job!
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Date: 7/29/2013 7:01:00 AM
my, russel... you wax romantic with a flow that glides on heavely lines...what a teasure of a piece... most fine write and form!..:) huggs
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