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Red roses you have sent Your favorite flower and mine A plane ticket brings us together In a short amount of time Stars align just for us Very often you do say Treasures in a secret box I protect them everyday +++++++ Written 12-26-2015 Combination of Three Words Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo #3 - A secret box, your favorite flower, a plane ticket 3rd Place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2016 11:30:00 AM

Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/13/2016 5:51:00 PM

Thanks Sara! It was fun to do. I find it amazing how members generously offer suggestions or critiques. I've been learning and having fun too. :)

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 1/12/2016 9:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Susan, and many thanks for reading my take on the White House./M

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/13/2016 5:48:00 PM

Thanks so much, Maurice, for stopping by and commenting. I forgot to mention the pic you used on the WH poem... perfect!

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/12/2016 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations Susan for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/13/2016 5:46:00 PM

Why thank you hans! Very kind of you to read and I appreciate the support and comment.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2016 11:11:00 PM

Susan Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/13/2016 5:45:00 PM

Thanks Linda! Hugs...

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 10:32:00 AM

SUSAN, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/10/2016 8:58:00 AM

Thanks SKAT. You're so nice.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/3/2016 12:29:00 PM

Simple and sweet! Congrats Susan!

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/10/2016 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Belveen!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2015 6:16:00 PM

you did a great job with this theme, Susan. Good luck in the contest, And wow, I am so glad that my santa poem made you LOL!!

Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 8:55:00 PM

Omg I laughed, every time I think about Iaugh. You wrote it so funny. I don't know if it was real or not, just too funny. Oh I changed my x to xylephone. Idk why the other wouldn't stay. Anyway, thank you and take care..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/27/2015 9:29:00 AM

Good morning, this would be listed under Quatrain because the second and forth line of each stanza are rhyming. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick

Susan Gentry
Date: 12/27/2015 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Rick! I've been trying to get time to study the forms. I appreciate you looking at the other one for me too. Hope all is well with you and yours. Have a safe and Happy New Year!