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Treasured Relic

“As long as it stands with four walls and a door, a church will remain a refuge” Treasured Relic I stroll upon the sandy path along the ocean side And come upon a little church, well worn by time and tide. Walking up the wooden steps, I open unlocked door. Aware I am trespassing I continue to explore. Fresh flowers at the altar and I soon come to realize, This church is not abandoned. I was too quick to surmise. Light through the stained glass windows is reflected on the walls, As if lighting them for guidance of the choir to their stalls. And then I hear them singing, notes still hang upon the air From the last hymn they had offered to parishioners gathered there. I turn as the church door opens and a small figure appears. It is not a ghost or phantom, I see plainly as she nears. She is a white haired lady with a smile upon her face. I stumble quickly backward but she does not slow her pace. I stammer an apology for my bold intrusion there. She says, "You need not worry you are always welcome here. It is kept for wayside travelers who might need a place to pray And a refuge from the weather should one need a place to stay. We still hold Sunday services when vacation folks are here. Stay as long as you would like to stay. You’re welcome, never fear." With a smile she turns and leaves me and I linger for an hour. As I pray I feel His presence and His everlasting power. Then gathering my coat and hat, I walk back to my parked car, Knowing I have found a refuge after traveling afar. By: Joyce Johnson 9/23/11 for Constance-My Dear Heart’s contest “A Church By the Ocean” Place no. 2

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Date: 10/6/2011 9:41:00 PM
lovely piece Joyce, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/5/2011 5:16:00 PM
Joyce, I LOVE this poem. Great couplets. Reads very smoothly. Tells a great story and just feels natural. A 1st place winner in my book. Nice job.
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Date: 10/5/2011 5:13:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on a wonderful exciting win in Church by the Ocean contest with lovely brilliant words of expressive poetry my friend..luv..
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Date: 10/5/2011 1:12:00 PM
Enjoyed this, Joyce. Congrats on your win! Kim
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:01:00 AM
Beautifully written Joyce. Congratulations on your second place win.
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:22:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem and am glad that you won.
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Date: 10/4/2011 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in "The Church By The Ocean" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2011 10:06:00 AM
awesome Joyce, the flow ofthe poem is superb, as well as the story. good luck with this in the contest. harry
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Date: 9/24/2011 12:25:00 AM
The description of your church could fit many along the New Jersey Shore. Nice descriptive rhyming couplets here.
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Date: 9/23/2011 11:27:00 PM
JOyce, I think Constance is absolutely going to adore this one. Wow, you really caught the essence of this contest and I "pray" I can do the same (now where can I find a little beach church to go pray in?) Luv, Andrea
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