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Treasure Shining

A silver creeping mist falling one cloud capping the mountain Like a great waterfall in a faraway distance I began dreaming gold Inside the vision silver fingers pointing out spears slowly crumbling forward Embracing one pure gift relic treasure memory of love Warm sweet glowing jewel in deep beauty Happiness inside shining diamond joy beaming your sunshine baby a star lighting one gem brightly dazzles a pearl I drew with a 6/stepping up waves to 9 syllable count then we reach cloud 9/9/9 10 is the perfect ending 10 out of 10 a mad way I am trying to draw a jewel

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Date: 12/12/2014 8:23:00 AM
Liam Mate!! A most beautiful golden singing Leprechaun write here indeed sparkin' and dazzlin' true!! Enjoyed it con mucho gusto!! Best Always, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/12/2014 11:25:00 AM
oh might start playing the harp what do you think pal this little green man is looking for wings then he will go places lol smiling gary
Date: 12/11/2014 10:18:00 PM
Dear Liam, this is indeed a very beautiful, romantic poem to be held close to ones heart. I love the warmth that it speaks of and the place this poem takes you to.Very beautiful pen as always my dearest friend! A 7 +++for you! Your quill is golden! May you always feel the embrace and love of God and His angels protecting you giving you their guidance light and strength. Keep the faith! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/12/2014 11:18:00 AM
a person can only draw in a moment of time wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated dorian bless you
Date: 12/11/2014 10:11:00 PM
A treasure of a poem Liam ! Cheers
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/12/2014 4:05:00 AM
arthur dear friend thank you for the truly heartfelt comment deeply appreciated
Date: 12/11/2014 4:56:00 PM
Liam, beautiful.. I could see the treasure shining.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/11/2014 6:00:00 PM
meg thank you for the truly beautiful comment bless you

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