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Lying gown by the brook Looking up at the stars Remembering the past, covered in dust Questioning myself of the fault I’ve done Through the wound of despair I hear its voice Feeling its firm hand Sweetly taking my heart Too afraid it’ll hurt me I take a step back Later realizing I was my TRASURE

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Date: 5/20/2016 6:35:00 AM
I love this piece so much. What a really hot newbie you are. Will be looking forward to more of this. A definite 7
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Ice Flames
Date: 5/22/2016 6:38:00 AM
I'm glad you liked it... Funom
Date: 5/19/2016 12:27:00 PM
Loved this short piece of your creativity.
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Ice Flames
Date: 5/22/2016 8:52:00 AM
Grateful :)

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