Treasure

in a gentle breeze whistling moans stroking the water softly furls in waves ashore a clam two seashells joined living each wave parting emotions as one brushing a tropical seabed drifting ashore feelings washed up on golden sands a searching dream at home were the heart is softly gently blowing caressed by the breeze gone with the wind as the tide recedes leaving behind picked up with hands of love's desire a silent breath i whisper heavenly satin touching divine beautiful within the soul's eyes treasured dreamy ~ ~ ~ ~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2013 9:25:00 PM

a beautiful poem... stopping by to say goodnight... Linda

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 4:59:00 AM

THANK YOU FROM THE HEART SO SWEET BEAUTIFUL

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/10/2013 2:04:00 PM

This poem is a treasure in itself! Glad that I found this one. A very beautiful piece of poetry, Liam! I loved it!...Thank you for commenting kindly on my poem "My Only One". It really means a lot to me!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/10/2013 2:46:00 PM

KELLY IT WAS A PLEASURE AS IS THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED THANK YOU KINDLY

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/10/2013 3:52:00 AM

In life many things are gone with the wind..Some others are to stay..Those i call treasures..the others memories. Home is where the heart is..and loving ourselves make us always feel home...That way if everybody s gone with the wind ..Our own existence would be enough to be happy..If they return in breeze's caress they can always be our guests.I love your thoughts penned here

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/10/2013 2:45:00 PM

HAPPINESS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT CHARMAINE IF YOU DO NOT HAVE THAT YOU HAVE NOTHING MONEY CAN NOT BUY YOUR COMMENT AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL I THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH HEARTFELT APPPRECIATED