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Travel Light

TRAVEL LIGHT QUADRO Photon Particle of Light Wave checks in hotel. “Where is your baggage?” “I travel light, free, single.” Syllable: 5 8 5 8. First and fourth line Rhyming. 01/14/17 Travel light Contest by Kai Michael Neumann

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/2/2017 5:09:00 PM

Short and very well written Quadro. Both humorous and thoughtful.I like this poem and is very different from the others (which is a good thing). Great work, Kai

Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/4/2017 9:33:00 PM

Thanks Kai for appreciation

Mark Martin

Date: 2/2/2017 3:40:00 PM

Of course if the photon doesn't pay the bill and the owner calls the cops, he might end up in prism (sorry). Anyway, great humourous poem. Congratulations Anisha! :-)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/4/2017 9:35:00 PM

Too good comment you have made. It will not end in prism but get reflected, refracted or diffracted.

Darren White

Date: 2/2/2017 6:44:00 AM

And coming back with congratulations for you :)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/4/2017 9:36:00 PM

Thanks Darren for your visit

Darren White

Date: 1/15/2017 10:19:00 AM

Heh, clever take on the contest. Good luck :)