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Trasvestite Mind

Transvestite Minds. What do you think? With thoughts on the brink, Of right and wrong. Actions that betray words, Words are never enough, A thousand pages blackened, Still conveys no though. What do you believe? With your two-faced conscience, Fake and unfaithful, Godless to a fault. You only spit, when you talk, Destroy, when you move, And sin, when you believe. What do you believe? With a trans gendered soul, Brother of Satin? Or is it Child of hope? In a world ruled by such, You are only one, my friend. Of the million transvestite minds.

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Moon Flower

Date: 5/29/2016 1:29:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, laraibi. :)

Brian Davey

Date: 5/23/2016 2:32:00 AM

Quite the different take you took this contest write to but you know what it worked! Thank you for entering my contest

Brian Davey
Date: 5/23/2016 2:36:00 AM

I just want to state that although I may not agree with the take on this contest as a judge I judged his poem on the poem itself in as bias of a manner as possible!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2016 7:39:00 AM

so Sad to even read this article, God help him... laraibi, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"