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Trapped Inside

Sometimes I think that I'm insane Trapped inside my lonely brain Only trained to stay in pain In my mind things stay the same Nothing intrigues me the whole worlds lame Crazy thoughts consume my brain Trapped in thoughts no sign of time Feeling like I'm left behind Implanted with this negative seed I doubt that I will ever succeed I long to burst out from this bubble of pain And free my self from my poisoned brain Nothing to lose, so much to gain To see the beauty in this world To get rid of this heavy shell This heavy shell that slows me down That keeps my head bowed to the ground That makes me feel like I'm in hell Please someone free me from this somber spell By Carmen Castro Copyright@2012

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Date: 5/19/2012 11:29:00 AM
i feel like this a lot, sad poem but totally relatable, and quite good! love, Juli.
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Carmen Castro
Date: 5/22/2012 3:10:00 PM
Thanks glad you liked it : )
Date: 5/19/2012 11:28:00 AM
i feel like this a lot, sad poem but totally relatable, and quite good! love, J.
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