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Trapped In the Past

Sometimes I feel lost in the moment Feel like my die is cast And times don’t have the same emotion Must be I’m trapped in the past Seems like there was a lot more love Also a lot less greed If my dad wanted a loan from the local bank A handshake was all he would need Meals were cooked on an old coal stove Clothes on the line in the yard Friday night fights on a black and white TV If you had a nickel, times weren’t hard Holding a sparkler on the fourth of July Sometimes your fingers got burned Honesty and pride in a hard day’s work Were a few of the lessons we learned Holding hot dogs over a campfire Embedded on a stick Burnt marshmallows for dessert Or some blueberries that we’d pick With a piece of branch and a sponge ball A game of baseball we played After working up a sweat We’d have home made lemonade Nothing ever went to waste Financially times were hard But even the leftover bread crumbs Were spread out for the birds in the yard How did the world come to this Not even relationships built to last If I have my choice of lifestyles Dear God, let me be trapped in the past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/9/2009 10:51:00 PM
vince, stop it. it hurts too bad. that is how good this poem is. janetta
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Date: 6/9/2009 6:58:00 AM
Nostalgic and beautiful. Yet we walked from the happiness of our discomforts then for the sadness of our comfort now, what is the better trade off to be? I too long again for moments like those gone, and feel the argument of the poem to my soul.
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Date: 6/6/2009 3:16:00 PM
Great write Vince, community is becoming an ever eroded word, of which i find rather sad>James
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Date: 6/5/2009 11:56:00 AM
So very well written and sentiments that I can so relate to. I grew up in another country, but when I read your poems, it feels like we could have been neighbors. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/5/2009 11:25:00 AM
There are two poets with one thinking ... age comes to this but we have no door ... a great write, sir Poet, I feel this one.
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Date: 6/5/2009 8:53:00 AM
Oh dear Vince the simpicity that life had at one time. The years roll on so quickly and bring about so much change that sometimes is hard to accept. But, you will always have your cherished memories of apparently a wonderful time in your life and you can seek peace in that when everday rumbles get rough. This will go to my favs dear friend.
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Date: 6/4/2009 11:02:00 PM
times have changed, im only 29 but i wish things were still like my childhood days. You knew your neighbour, and community spirit still run thick. Excellent read and thankyou for my comment,
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Date: 6/4/2009 4:07:00 AM
The memories of the past bring good feelings. As I read your write I could still see the sparklers on the 4th, and hotdogs on a stick. I remember sitting on the ice cream freezer while someone turned it.....a service station that actually pumped your gas, and washed your windshiled, wow, time is flying....thanks Vince, always, Christy
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Date: 6/3/2009 10:24:00 PM
Love the way you make us long for gentler times of our youth, Vince. If only we could go back and feel the joy of holding the sparkler again in a child's hands! Love this trip back to baseball, marshmallow, campfires and feeding bread crumbs to birds. Your recount of these events is absolutely magnificent. Love, carolyn
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Date: 6/3/2009 5:35:00 PM
Well stake me down beside you. Everyday a little more of our life they steal away in the name of progress, well if that is the case I choose to digress. God Bless, Ron
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Date: 6/3/2009 3:14:00 PM
Vince wish we could all live in that era. Thanks for taking me back. I certainly understand your feelings and thoughts. Wonderful nostalgic write that only you can share. GBU Michael Been away for a while have to catch up.
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Date: 6/3/2009 12:17:00 PM
nostalgia at it's very best..I'm sure in that past they were looking back to an earlier past...Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2009 9:23:00 AM
A heart felt story... enjoyed and have a pleasant day.
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Date: 6/3/2009 8:39:00 AM
Yes....I ponder this over and over as well..."How did the world come to this?"....I too, look to the past, and cherish what we had and have lost. Once again, you have captured to best of times in poetry...God Bless
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Date: 6/3/2009 7:52:00 AM
Vince. Thank you for your comments. I was intrigued by the title of this poem and when I read it...it took me back to the wonderful times you depict in your lovely poem. God, I wish those days were here again...I miss them! Patricia
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