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Trapped In Love

I can no longer go here or go there; My heart disallows me. Unless, you command it differently. Methodically, anxiously, my will goes to waste. I cannot do without you. My heart is yours, indefinitely.

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Skat A

Date: 11/17/2015 10:21:00 PM

Wendydawn, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Daver Austin

Date: 11/16/2015 9:59:00 AM

"indefinitely." Good word - falls short of forever. This girl has spunk. Congrats. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2015 8:53:00 PM

Wendydawn, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Wendydawn Brindley
Date: 11/6/2015 10:04:00 AM

Thank you. I don't write a lot of poetry so I appreciate everyone being so kind and encouraging. I normally write conservative columns, Christian books, Children's books, and I am finishing two novels- one is a thriller and the other is a romantic comedy. I admire all those who are poets since I do not consider myself anything but an amatuer :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/5/2015 11:52:00 AM

- Hello Wendydawn :) - Welcome to P - Soup :) - A great first poem from you, a delight to read :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Wendydawn Brindley
Date: 11/6/2015 10:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for your compliment. I appreciate your time and it helps to encourage those who do not often write poetry/ like me ! :) Have a nice weekend!

Skat A

Date: 11/5/2015 11:45:00 AM

Wendydawn, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Wendydawn Brindley
Date: 11/6/2015 10:07:00 AM

Thank you. I don't write a lot of poetry so I appreciate everyone being so kind and friendly. As I was telling another Poetry soupster, I write conservative columns, Christian books, Children's books, and I am finishing two novels- one is a thriller and the other is a romantic comedy. There is a lot of great information on this sight! And I do admire all those who are poets since I do not consider myself anything but an amatuer :)