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Trapped

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Trapped



Suddenly trapped inside my own head
Desperate to find a way out
Walls of ice provide no hold
Blood dripping from torn hands
Time is running short
I must get out
Of this hell
Of this 
dream....

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  1. Date: 6/19/2012 8:09:00 PM
    a good emotive one, Barbara!!

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 4:11:00 PM
    I like this alot.... short n sweet... nice write

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 3:46:00 PM
    Very nice write...should be a winner!!!

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 3:28:00 PM
    Great work here Barbara.. I enjoyed the image you presented..

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 3:23:00 PM
    I was getting scared until the last line. Some dreams can be pretty scary, though. Great piece.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 2:08:00 PM
    Wow! Your nonet reminds me of a few anxiety attacks I have suffered through. I have found that lying down with your feet elevated works wonders. Bringing the BP back to normal, thus, the thoughts relax. Hugs, catie :)