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Trapped

Suddenly trapped inside my own head Desperate to find a way out Walls of ice provide no hold Blood dripping from torn hands Time is running short I must get out Of this hell Of this dream....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/19/2012 8:09:00 PM
a good emotive one, Barbara!!
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Date: 6/10/2012 4:11:00 PM
I like this alot.... short n sweet... nice write
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Date: 6/10/2012 3:46:00 PM
Very nice write...should be a winner!!!
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Date: 6/10/2012 3:28:00 PM
Great work here Barbara.. I enjoyed the image you presented..
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Date: 6/10/2012 3:23:00 PM
I was getting scared until the last line. Some dreams can be pretty scary, though. Great piece.
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